rainbow dot's adventure that was pretty good
that game was pretty good, some things that I didn't like were the ball mechanics. The ball didn't flow right... it's hard to explain? it was slightly hard to control but that wasn't the problem... o w/e. the other thing is that if you are using gradient objects as solids in the game, put a dark border around them or something. they didn't look nice. you could make the end rainbow look nicer too, not just a simple gradient. technically I'm saying you have all the basic stuff down now and alot of the secondary, but you need to spritz it up and make it look and feel nice now. thats all really. I liked the Zelda song. =P
good job and good luck.