It reminds me of something by Justin Timberlake,
or the stuff SNL makes with their little music videos.
You know?
I like it. But that bass is crazy, I'm worried it's blowing out my speakers. I like it tho it fits.
just make it longer and put some more effort into linking those bits together and forming a real song!
ALMOST PERFECT
I've listened to this song in a hunger for Rainbow Road, and it has almost sated me.
But two things are wrong.
1. It's missing a certain energy. See if you can intensify your leads, make your bass prominent, idk
it needs mastering to make it sound POWERFUL
2. GIVE IT SOME FATTER BEATS. The drums are barely supporting the rest of the song. THe bass should be PUMPIN!
So I really liked it. I vote 5
GOOD JOB
Its so awesome
That I just did this the other day,
and it was my first song that got real recognition when I just played the way I felt. Simple and clean on a piano.
This is beautiful. Having done the same thing as you, it really warms me.
Keep playing what you feel. because amazing stuff comes out!
Wow that was interesting
I love Zelda good job.
I have a feeling you are okay with disharmic and dissonant sounds. Well... honestly not that many people are. The majority of the world likes clean harmonies.
I was okay with the disharmonic stuff, but honestly I have to say it sortof hurt me a little. Maybe that was the intended effect.
But ouch
Generally you're stuff didn't flow either but whatever if you wanted it to flow I bet you would've made it do that.
So yea this was cool, in a sortof "it hurts but I like it" way
XD
This is pretty sick
Seriosly, I respect that you wrote a song in 5/4. It's pretty amazing. It pretty much has a really forced tense feeling to the beat, like your keeping up with something (the 5/4 beat haha)
But really it lends a cool air to the song. Let me just say though that the violin solo sounds just the slightest bit OFF in a way(in timing), and at some point you have this electric guitar baseline that distorts downwards... Actually I found it again it's right at the end. It's really out of sync with the rest of the music. Oops okay the real one I was thinking about is at 0:30 too. So yea just those two things and there's not many ways you can make this song better after that.
5/5 cuz I loved it
Wow you sent a message, and I listened
And now I am greeted by an EPIC song!
Thank you for making my night more bearable!
Download, and respect holmes.
Frickin Awesome.
Badass
I agree with Indiedance that mastering would be a good idea. Cuz yea, I can also hear at some points later on in the song when the melody is drowned out by the bass.
Buuut overall I agree with the potential, and most of it is already there. Most of the song was definitely bumpin'.
So hella good job 5/5
Hooly crap. Thank you
I loved that game. You did a great job. It withheld it's epicosity.
Hahaha now to listen to this all night on loop. Great job dude. I might even consider a download.
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